my first poem that makes me proud

Although I’ve written numerous poems before, I never truly thought any of them were good. But this morning I jumped out my bed because I was so inspired and the words were pouring out of my head. I couldn’t afford to lose it.

Fling

Beauty
on the other side
of the road.
It was you
shining through.
Air
full of twinkling stars,
blowing away
my fatigue
and dirt.
Embrace me
with your godlike
bosom.
Never before
had I been drunk
with flowers
on my cheek
tainted pink
and light
scented.

- by Dodo


8 Comments Leave a Comment

Daynah [ Quote ]

Aww, sweet, beatiful words sis… I like the poem. :)

May 12th, 2002 at 12:38 pm
Lauren [ Quote ]

thats a really pretty poem :) Nice job, dodo

May 12th, 2002 at 12:46 pm
Catherine [ Quote ]

Great poem, Dodo! I really like it, keep up the good work :D

May 12th, 2002 at 3:01 pm
Louise [ Quote ]

That is marvelous work ^.^ i

May 12th, 2002 at 3:37 pm
Kathleen [ Quote ]

very nice poem. It is quite dramatic and powerful. ^^

May 12th, 2002 at 3:45 pm
ecila [ Quote ]

simply beautiful =)

May 12th, 2002 at 3:58 pm
donaville [ Quote ]

charming poem, dodo =D

May 12th, 2002 at 10:10 pm
dida [ Quote ]

:) This is beautiful

March 28th, 2004 at 1:30 am

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