Posted by: pureessence on: May 12, 2002
Although I’ve written numerous poems before, I never truly thought any of them were good. But this morning I jumped out my bed because I was so inspired and the words were pouring out of my head. I couldn’t afford to lose it.
Fling
Beauty
on the other side
of the road.
It was you
shining through.
Air
full of twinkling stars,
blowing away
my fatigue
and dirt.
Embrace me
with your godlike
bosom.
Never before
had I been drunk
with flowers
on my cheek
tainted pink
and light
scented.
- by Dodo
thats a really pretty poem
Nice job, dodo
Great poem, Dodo! I really like it, keep up the good work
That is marvelous work ^.^ i
very nice poem. It is quite dramatic and powerful. ^^
simply beautiful =)
charming poem, dodo =D
This is beautiful
May 12, 2002 at 12:38 pm
Aww, sweet, beatiful words sis… I like the poem.