a poem for my love

I listen to your breath
I put my head on your chest
and hear your heartbeat

It’s the most peaceful moment
I can’t help but reminisce
all the beautiful songs we
wrote for each other

Sometime I wish you can hear
my heart calling
They are the words I can not
speak out loud.

It’s the feeling I have
sometimes strong
sometimes weak

Stories built on experiences
They taught me watch out
for certain things on the road

I’m looking forward to sew together
my broken dreams too
Eager but helpless

I just want you to know
I still love you so

If you can see it in my tears
  feel it in my touches
  hear it my voices

New year is awaiting
I want to look out of the window
See brightness outside

Will you please hold my hand?

I love you

dodo


5 Comments Leave a Comment

linda [ Quote ]

wow…what a beautiful poem! It made me tear….

December 28th, 2001 at 3:54 pm
Cat [ Quote ]

That is a beautiful poem, Dodo! You’re a great writer.

December 28th, 2001 at 4:53 pm
ecila [ Quote ]

awww…. it’s so beautiful.
So sinser, and gentle it in it’s own way

December 29th, 2001 at 6:15 pm
lauryn [ Quote ]

how touching. you’re so poetic dodo :)

December 30th, 2001 at 2:51 am
manda [ Quote ]

aw dodo. That’s such a sweet poem! Andy is very lucky.

December 31st, 2001 at 11:43 am

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